Revisions-Article

After review of the feedback I received on my article and its layout, I decided that it would be best to add more pictures to the second page, as well as branding at the bottom of the pages. With pictures distributed throughout the text, it prevents reading eyes from becoming too tired by giving them something that is visually appealing. The branding located at the bottom of the page reveals the magazine company and when this specific issue was published; it also gives recognition to our company and those who worked hard to produce this article. Giving this recognition and publishing date to the magazine increases the professionalism of the magazine because now, a consumer is able to easily find the company of the magazine and accredit them if the credit is due.